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August 18, 2003
Unprofessional Video Game Writing
As an occasionaly scuba diver with a passion for deep blue depths, I was eager to play EverBlue 2, a February 2003 PlayStation2 release from Capcom. The game is an odd mix of console-style Japanese RPG and first person underwater exploration. Not poorly executed either! There are definitely some limitations on the "freedom" of swimming around underwater, and the game takes broad liberties with scuba diving. But the gameplay of searching out sunken wrecks, exploring and excavating them, and helping people on shore with lost items - it's all good times. I wanted to review EverBlue 2, but I didn't want to review it in the context of being a video game, I wanted to review the game's capacity to reflect the experience of scuba diving. I contacted Rodale's Scuba Diving magazine, a publication that concerns itself with hot diving spots and new rebreathers. I pitched them their first video game review. Here's a draft I submitted to them as a review back in April. I was working here to be straightforward and descriptive, from a diver's perspective: Landlocked divers yearning for deep water might find their fix in a new video game. Capcom's Everblue 2 won't train you on the proper use of dive gear, but it does capture some of the fun and feeling of diving. Comments
Citation is like oxygen Inseparable liberties thrown on paradigms Nice descriptive review, and a great cross media / cultural idea. Good thinking. Posted by: ZYirAH on August 19, 2003 11:47 PMYour reviews sounds wonderful! I don't like scuba diving, but I'd like to check out that game. :) It sounds to me like you had a similar experience to what I went through with Romantic Times Magazine- except they gave me the "books" to read (unedited manuscript) and gave me a word count. Oh and all the reviews had to be positive. They reworded some of my reviews, the worst corruption being changing "Gypsy" and "Princess" to "the gypsy" and "the princess"- I no longer review for them. Posted by: Kerrie on August 21, 2003 02:02 PMWow, if that was my review, I would be very upset that it got butchered so badly. "Show junior who's boss"? what year is this? 1987? It infuriates me to no end when media outlets try to portray videogames as some exotic other. I think the idea of getting videogame reviews into non-gaming outlets is really interesting. However, I find what they did to your review and how they tried to dumb it down and cool it up even more interesting. Posted by: Bryan Young on August 30, 2003 04:43 PMWow, if that was my review, I would be very upset that it got butchered so badly. "show junior who's boss"? what year is this? 1987? It infuriates me to no end when media outlets try to portray videogames as some exotic other. I think the idea of getting videogame reviews into non-gaming outlets is really interesting. However, I find what they did to your review and how they tried to dumb it down and cool it up even more interesting. Posted by: bryan young on August 30, 2003 04:44 PMI'm suprised that they even gave you credit for that review. Except for punctuation and capital letters, the review is totally different. I'm wondering who really wrote it and why they didn't want their name on it and decided to put yours.
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