Nice spin.

So she dumped you? Get your hands out of your pants, and put down the Final Cut Pro. ;-)

Not to be an asshole, but it's presumably your third decade. (Like the 2000s are the 21st Century.)

-LMV

I wonder if she read about your interest in her on your website.

I hope you at least got some poonanny.

uh, I think, man, like he means his second decade as an adult. right justin?

right, he said "the waning days of my second days" meaning he is on the heels of his third. i got that. although, this "prose" is so moist that i didn't get that he actually slept with her. it's all so extra, this "prose." i wish there could be some clarity so i could decipher what's going on...

"waning days of the second decade" can ONLY mean 18-19. This was a mistake; wishful thinking, maybe, but no big deal. But I'm with L-- I don't think that this thesaurus-pumped cheerleader lyricism really suits Justin. Wrong style. The Digital Frontier De-subjectivized Gonzo Experimentalism better activates the prose for him, and in the end conveys more depth and resonance than this kind of thing. Careful, Justin--you don't want to sound like one of those wisful drones in Redmond who spend their meager time at home trying to recreate in blog mode their sophomore fiction writing workshops back at WSU.

"Get out there and do it.
Don't let others tell you, you can't.
Believe in what you believe, take your own path,
be true to yourself."

Remember,
Justin

(P.S. I have the utmost faith in you, that you have the faith to succeed.)

Taylor Belisarius Golding

This is excellent writing, people! Would you put fois gras in between hamburger buns just so you could give it the familiar name of "sandwich"? :)

er...hamburger buns? foie gras? "sandwich?" is this yet another sexual reference that i am just not getting here?

Thats what Daniel Boulud does..

What are you people talking about??

Euphemization of matters of the heart/poonanny.