opening fade in - on freeze frame?
total facial
- dobutsunomori over bodyscan wipe
- feather edges on eyes cropped
- center eyes
- solarize "shock" at 1:00:10
saturate hands - color filter red
shock to body (soul) (heart)
religious symbols
"make something crazy"
window of the trancevision
- frame over opaque
frame hold and then opacity down (like silverio)
- widow title
"I'm hard"
"I can't breathe"
- trim speech after tantra

- outline text
move 150 hours a week later
trim out (problems in old relationship)
eyes alone too much early
- happiness, joy, sadness - too much
- "this is a holy thing we're doing"
- I was expecting more people - too short
- delay widow credit
- 90 miunutes later
FIST
when I look in your eyes - slower return
"I can't breathe"
"recorded the ngiht before the ritual"

eyes transparent over body scan?
expand initial eye window right
shorten dobutsunomori text length

Music:
Two Zombies Later - Archive
Benny Hill MIDI over
piano, banjo, strings

THRUST - The Search for Intimacy
SAV - to pose questions, to promote longing
DAV - to provoke curiousity



credits:
widow centauri
sallie ngarmtap
michael schmit

second camera:
sallie

music:
Scm - String Quartet
Princes Orchestra - On the Mississippi
Projekti 3

pillow book, by peter greenaway

consultation:
sherry
elly
amy
daniele
mark
brandon

Questions:
"the voiceover portions might have run a little long,
some with not enough other stuff happening on screen."
"Did the visual effects serve the story?"
"How could I have prepared better to create a more thematically-appropriate experience?"
"Was the intent to shock?"


curio - notebook
delicious library